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My 18th birthday was a week ago, this photograph is of my birthday "cake" 
Here's another shot:
In case anyone is wondering, it was a delicious lemon pie with strawberry and kiwi topping
Here's another shot:
In case anyone is wondering, it was a delicious lemon pie with strawberry and kiwi topping
Image size
2592x3888px 3.42 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XS
Shutter Speed
1/8 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
47 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
May 6, 2010, 3:12:33 AM
© 2010 - 2024 purplekyloe
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Originality Technique ImpactI'm sure you might see this one coming: the photograph is too dark! I think you could have really made the sleeping colors wake up in this photo with some bounced flash. Alternatively, take a moment to set up your tripod and use a longer exposure. I can tell that the colors in here were vibrant, they just weren't captured in that state.
Also, your watermark is a little too intrusive for my taste. I know you're protecting your work by placing it really deep in the image, but it's pretty distracting.
Other than that, the depth of field usage is excellent, and the picture makes me hungry for some strawberries!